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READER MAIL RESPONSES 01/21/02

This is a new column in which I'll post some recent responses I've made to e-mail messages. I hope you find them interesting!

-----Original Message-----
To: readermail@megafortress.com
Sent: Monday, January 21, 2001
Subject: A question of motivation...

Dear Mr. Brown,
I have to say that it is all your fault. In seventh grade I went to the library and picked the most interesting book I could find to read. The title of it was "Day of the Cheetah". I finished the book in a few short days. Since then, I have been hooked. Not only on your writing, but on aircraft in general. I studied military aircraft ad nauseum. By the time I graduated high school, I had a huge amount of knowledge, and nothing to do with it. So, I tried to write. I found that I had a decent ability with words for an amateur. What I did not have was motivation. I have never finished a long story that I have begun. Sixty typed pages is the most I have managed. Now I am stuck in a dillema. I have an excellent, detailed story idea in my head that I would love to write, but I am worried that I will begin it and not finish. Do you have any such difficulties? If so, how do you stay motivated. I hope to hear back from you, if you have the opportunity. Thanks.

P.S. Your reply needn't be as long-winded as my letter. I have a tendancy to be that way!

From: Dale Brown
Subject: RE: A question of motivation...

Thanks for your e-mail!

If you find you lack motivation to do something, whether it's writing or taking out the garbage, it's usually caused by a lack of goal-setting. Either you don't have a goal, or you haven't defined it clearly enough or planned carefully enough to formulate a strategy for achieving it.

You like aircraft in general but find it hard to write longer than a few dozen pages. Maybe you're not ready for a novel. Sixty pages on one family of aircraft or one conflict or event may not be more than one chapter in a novel, but it would make a fine serialized magazine article, or it would be one-half of a screenplay.

Or if it's aircraft you love but the writing is somewhere on the back burner in interest, maybe try doing something else in the aviation field. Go to an aviation college, like Embry-Riddle, and get a degree and a pilot's license. Like designing planes? Get a degree in aeronautical engineering. Like mechanical stuff? Get an A&P license. Or just go to a Part 61 or Part 141 school and get your licenses and ratings and see if you like it.

If you don't have the money for school, try getting a job at an airport, or get an internship at an aviation company, or volunteer for an aviation-related organization (check out www.airlifeline.org). Want to think way out of the box? Enlist in the Air National Guard or Air Force. You'll get a real dose of military immersion then, and they'll pay you to do it! The Air National Guard is the best-kept secret in the U.S.

If you want to write, remember that all writers have dry spells or writer's block. Sometimes just getting out and doing something not involving sitting at a desk and writing helps. I like to go on research trips, ridealongs, even visits to a control tower or air traffic control facility--anything related to what I'm writing. Contact a base public affairs guy and ask if you can take a tour or do some interviews of pilots, techs, maintenance guys, cops, special ops guys, etc.

The idea is, you need to figure out exactly what makes you happy, then do it. Writing make not be your thing. Usually if something is difficult to keep going at, it may not be what you want to do. Spend some time, think about what you really want, then ask your parents, friends, advisors, professors, and acquaintances what might be good ways to go about achieving your goal. If you "think outside the box," you'll be surprised at how many ways you can tackle a job.

Let me know how it goes, OK?

GBA, Dale...

-----Original Message----- From: Dan Starr
Sent: Tuesday, October 02, 2001 12:39 PM
To: Dale Brown
Subject: interesting article

Dear Mr. brown,

The following was forwarded to me by a friend. Sorry I don¹t know what publication it comes from. My own thinking was a bit parallel to it, that there¹s just too much more behind these events to think it was just lashing out at America.

For my own part, because bin Laden is an exiled Saudi Prince, I was worrying that the next target might be the oil loading facilities at Dharan, Saudi Arabia. Imagine what that would do to commodity prices and the whole American economy.

regards
======================
see the articles:
Bin Laden's Trap: Less Game Theory and More Game Plan

Bin Laden's Trap, Part 2: How To Lure the Americans In

Bin Laden's Trap, Part 3: What America Can Do

Thanks for your e-mail!

The article looks like it came from "Slate," which is a very liberal online newsletter (which I happen to subscribe to) edited by Michael Kinsley.

I don't believe for a second that the terrorists left behind manuals (and apparently visited crop dusting airports and businesses) just to throw a scare into Americans and cause them to panic and become mindless psychopathic killers. I believe they really intended to use crop dusters to spread toxins over the U.S. It certainly is more believable than hijacking four airliners nearly simultaneously and crashing it into various targets in NYC and DC.

I believe the goal of the terrorists was simple: strike out at a symbol of American power and influence. What other things are symbols of America? I thought of Hollywood, the Alamo, Disneyland--and baseball. A crop duster flying over a baseball stadium or over Disneyland with anthrax or a nerve agent could have killed or maimed more than were killed in the WTC.

The goal of the U.S.-led anti-terrorist campaign is NOT to hunt down Osama bin Laden cave to cave through the mountains of Afghanistan in winter. The goal is to try to weaken the forces that support terrorists like bin Laden. The mission is fourfold: pick and choose military and government targets for precision-guided weapon attacks; support the resistance forces; support the civilian population in the hope that as the winter wears on they won't be sucked in to supporting the Taliban just to feed themselves; and hope that the distribution of food in Afghanistan will eventually draw al-Qaida forces into the open and lead U.S. forces to their hideouts.

Everyone seems to want to know when the "ground war" will start. That question was asked repeatedly during the Gulf War. It's as if there really isn't a war going on unless it's a "ground war." In Desert Storm, the air war was so effective that the ground war only lasted 100 hours--yet the Iraqi army was one of the largest, the best-equipped, and the most battle-tested on Earth.

Saudi Arabia and other key U.S. allies in the Middle East could very well be targets, although attacking another Muslim regime could cause al-Qaida to lose support amongst other Muslims. But oil terminals in the Persian Gulf? Perfect target (although unlike the U.S., many of those countries have anti-aircraft defenses in place and are not afraid to use them).

A profile of the ones involved in the attacks on the WTC and DC show that these terrorists are indeed smart, educated, and dedicated--they are not street punks throwing rocks at Israeli troops in Gaza. This could be a long, well-planned campaign of terror against the U.S. and its friends and allies. That's why we need to respond as if there is such a campaign underway. We have to be vigilant, distrustful, suspicious, and ultra-cautious. It means we need to change our way of life. We should accept that fact as quickly as possible.

I have absolutely no doubt that anti-American sentiment will grow once the shooting starts. It simply doesn't matter to me what the world thinks of our anti-terrorism campaign. When the U.S. finds a suitable target, we should strike at it--maybe not always with bombs, but it should be attacked, fiercely and deliberately. Some of the players involved have their own reason for supporting us: Iran wants us to stamp out the Taliban so their power and influence in the region will grow; the Central Asian republics want more U.S. aid; Pakistan and India want us to lift embargoes placed against them for testing nuclear weapons. But the bottom line is this: whoever supports us or doesn't support us doesn't matter. If we engage in this battle, we should be prepared to fight it, alone if necessary.

Who decides who, what, where, when, and how to attack? We elected a president to make that decision for us. Right or wrong, if he's a leader, he should decide. Waiting is appropriate too--but not making a decision is irresponsible.

What should America do? Continue to prepare to attack the terrorists and the forces that support them, and continue to put in place programs and mechanisms to protect and defend the citizens of the U.S. Does this mean a ground war in the snow? I hope not, but it might. An air war? A cyber-war? A robot war? All of the above. When will it happen? As soon as a target is identified. How long will it be? As long as identifiable targets are within reach.

Dale Brown

Dale:

Thanks for the answer. Will try to include it in whatever we do here for Friday editions.

What are your thoughts on the last part of my question... do you think there is a greater need for secrecy on the home front than in '90'-91? Base folks won't touch that with a 10-foot refuelling probe...

JAP

John Andrew Prime
http://www.shreve.net/~japrime/
Boycott China goods and Olympics 2008!

From: "Dale Brown"
To: "'John Andrew Prime'"
Subject: RE: Son of "Media query"
Date: Wed, 19 Sep 2001 21:28:01 -0700

John:

Yes, I think we'll need more secrecy this time than in '90 and '91 because of the nature of the battle.

In Desert Storm, our objective was to kick out a large invading army. We sent a quarter of a million troops halfway around the world and organized another half-million troops from all over the world. Nothing secretive about all that. In that case, it was better to control the media rather than deny all access.

This time, our objective is to hunt down and destroy individuals and small groups hiding out throughout the world. If they discover we're looking for them, they'll run, and it'll be harder to find them. So we need to move smaller, more mobile, more high-tech forces much quicker and much stealthier to be effective.

The politics are more sensitive too. In '90, Iraq threatened Arabs and non-Arabs, Sunni and Shiite Muslims--the fear was universal. Now, things are much more gray. The Taliban may not be the elected legitimate government of Afghanistan, for instance, but they are powerful and in control. They also enjoy some support from other moderate Arab countries like Saudi Arabia. So killing the Taliban in a massive air raid probably wouldn't be a wise move. Some of our so-called supporters have their own agendas too--we would like the help of powers such as Iran and Syria, but they'll ask a heavy price for such cooperation.

Part of the Operation Infinite Justice will be to attack military bases, weapon storage areas, marshaling yards, bunkers, lines of communications, air defenses, radar, meeting places, command posts, etc. That will be part of the overt war, the one most of the public will see. The covert war will be fought in the shadows between small groups of highly mobile commandos stalking one another; and also between warring computers, networks, and satellites. That part of the war will be in the shadows. The media will never get access to that part of the war, except only in brief glimpses or propaganda-style vignettes.

Yes, I think "Infinite Justice" will be harder to cover because it will involve more covert ops, at least in the later stages. But Bush is prepared to pound on Afghanistan, Iran, Iraq, Syria, even Pakistan and Saudi Arabia, in order to flush out bin Laden and others like him.

The B-52 is perfect for this kind of mission: long range, heavy payload, no need for bases in Pakistan or the Persian Gulf region. The bases in Bahrain and even Kuwait are PRIME targets for terrorists. The B-1B is a better choice, and of course the B-2 is the first weapon of choice for the initial stages--softening up air defenses, destroying air bases, destroying the remaining Afghan army units surviving. Once we have air superiority, the B-52 has the payload to destroy the Taliban headquarters at Kandahar.

I think Bush recognized immediately that he was not going to get any support for sending troops into the mountains of Afghanistan to try to root out bin Laden, so he specifically said he would target those who support terrorists--that means he's going after the Taliban and any other government that supports terrorism. We will not have to bomb caves. Most of the battle will take place in the banks, World Bank, U.N., etc. We will strike out, but Afghanistan will capitulate not because we bombed them, but because we cut off food, fuel, medicine, etc.

Domestic terrorism will be on the rise in any case, whether we respond militarily or not. We need to respond forcefully and decisively and remind the nations of the world how powerful we really are. At the same time, we need to change the way we live, work, travel, and interact here in the U.S. The world has changed too much to go back to the easy, carefree way it was.

We need to use all our bombers to pound any nation that supports terrorists, and we need to create an American fortress that distrusts everyone. We can't afford to lose any more WTCs.

Write anytime! Dale...

-----Original Message-----
From: Dale Brown
Sent: Saturday, September 22, 2001 10:52 PM
To: Odea, FN (P-2)
Subject: Hi Brennan!

GREAT e-mail! I loved it! I'll post your jokes on my Web site. Others will get a kick out of it. http://www.megafortress.com. I'll also forward it to everyone in the family. They'll get a kick out of it too.

We're doing fine here. We're glued to the TV absorbing everything about our response to the terrorist act in NYC and DC. We're thinking about you guys a lot. We don't want to see you go off to war but if you do we want you to KICK SOME ASS!

Write again when you can, have fun, and stay out of trouble for a change! ;-)

Love, Dale...

-----Original Message-----
From: Odea, FN (P-2)
Sent: Sunday, 23 September, 2001 06:13
To: 'bear@megafortress.com'
Subject: RE: Hi Brennan!

UNCLE DALE !!!!!!!

THE BOOK MAN.

HOWS LIFE?? PROFITABLE??

YEAH WELL... IM DOING GOOD AND IAM BETTER KNOWING THAT MY RICHEST UNCLE WROTE ME. YEA I BEEN DOING GOOD. SO MY MOM TOLD YOU ABOUT ME, LATELY?? WELL IF NOT......

IM IN THE NAVY, A GIVEN. I WORK IN THE BOLLOWS OF A CARRIER, THE JOHN F. KENNEDY. ENGINEERING. I AND MY FELLOW WORKERS HELP MAKE THE SHIP MOVE THROUGH THE WATER. I AN E-2. I PLAN ON LEAVING THIS RATE AND MOVE ON TO SOMETHING I FEEL WILL BENFEIT ME MORE.DRAFTSMAN IS WHAT IM WORKING TOWARD. TO DRAW ALL DAY,IS SOMETHING I CAN DO. PLUS IT HELP ME IN THE COLLEGE AREA TOO.

IVE BEEN TO THE VIRGIN ISLAND, NAMLY THE ISLAND OF ST. MARTTEN. NOW WERE HEADED TO ST.THOMAS. THEN HOME ( I HOPE). IM STATIONED IN MAYPORT NAVAL BASE IN JACSONVILLE FLORIDA.I NICE IN FLORIDA AND CLOSE TO MY DAD.

I HAVE LOADS OF BUDS DOWN HERE. ALL ARE COOL IN DIFFERENT WAS, AND ALL TREAT ME LIKE AN OLDER BTOTHER. IM ONE OF THE YOUNGEST IN MY WORK STATION. SO I GET THE YOUNGER BROTHER TREATMENT. THEY PICK ON ME, BUT ONLY CAUSE THEY LIKE WRESTLING WITH ME. I GET THE SAME KIND OF TREATMENT AS ID EXPECT FROM,SAY, KEV AND RYAN.

THE CHOW IS OK. THE SLEEP CAN BE GREAT AT TIMES, BUT SOMETIMES YOU GOT TO CONTEND WITH OTHERS IN THE SAME BERTHING AS YOU, SO..... JUST THINK ABOUT LOCKING YOUSELF IN YOU HOME FOR A COUPLE MONTHS AT A TIME, WITH YOU NOT-SO CLOSEST FRIENDS, YOULL SEE.

:SOME OTHER WAYS TO REALTE TO US NAVY FOLK:

* SET YOUR ALARM CLOCK FOR A RANDOM TIME, AND GO TO BED. WHEN THAT RANDOM TIME GOES OFF, HOP OUT OF BED, GET DRESSED AS FAST AS YOU CAN, RUNNING TO THE FRONT LAWN TO MAN A GARDEN HOSE. (GENERAL QUARTERS)

*LIVE IN A HAZE GRAY TRASH CAN. REALLY.

*PUT YOU PIPES AND WIRING ON THE OUTSIDE OF THE WALLS OF YOU HOME. SO YOU CAN SEE THEM.

*LOCK YOURSELF IN YOU HOUSE FOR 6 MONTHS. WHEN YOU "ARRIVE AT HOMEPORT", WAVE TO YOU FAMILY FROM YOUR FRONT WINDOW,CAUSE YOU HAVE DUTY THAT DAY AND CAN'T LEAVE THE SHIP TILL THE NEXT DAY. =(

*PUT ON A PAIR OF HEAD PHONES, WALK INTO YOUR KITCHEN AND GO TO THE STOVE. PERIODICALLY, SHOUT " ALL SYSTEMS NORMAL"

*HAVE YOUR MOTHER-IN-LAW WRITE DOWN THE THINGS SHE PLANS ON HAVING YOUR FAMILY DO, THEN FILE OUT TO THE FRONT LAWN IN YOU BEST CLOSE, EARLY IN THE MORNING, SAY, 5 AM, AND HAVE HER READ WHAT THOSE THINGS WERE. (MORNING MUSTERS)

*GO INTO YOUR KITCHEN, KNOCKING THING FROM SHELVES, TURN TO YOU WIFE AND KIDS AND YELL AT THEM THAT IT WAS STOWED FOR ROUGH SEAS. (ATG INSPECTIONS)

*GET DRESSED IN YOU SUNDAY BEST. GO TO THE WORST PART OF TOWN. GET DRUNK AND TRY TO STUMBLE BACK HOME, WITHOUT GETTING DIRTY.

* LIVE WITH SOME OF YOU NOT SO CLOSEST FRIENDS FOR 6 MONTHS. (DEPLOYMENT)

*GO OUTSIDE AND START YOUR CAR. THEN, TURN IT OFF. DO THIS A COUPLE TIMES. THEN DRIVE OFF TO WORK. (PLANT TEST AND LIGHT OFFS.)

* POST A SIGN THAT TELLS OF THE WEEKS BREAKFAST,LUNCH, AND DINNER MEALS. ONE DAY, WRITE SOME THING THAT YOU KNOW THE FAMILY WILL LOVE. THEN WHEN THEY LINE UP FOR THIS WONDERFUL "CHOW", SERVE DAY OLD HOT DOGS. DO THIS FOR A COUPLES DAYS, SERVING THE SAME HOT DOGS. ( NAVY CHOW MENUS)

WELL THATS ALL I CAN THINK OF. HOPE IVE MADE YOU LAUGH. IT GOT ME WHEN I HEARD IT. BUT IT IS ALL TRUE. ALL THAT WILL PUT YOU IN A FEEL FOR US.REALLY

WELL I THINK IVE WROTE MORE THAN MY FINGERS COULD BARE.

ILL KEEP IN TOUCH. YOU FOLKS TAKE CARE NOW. BY THE WAY HOW IS EVERYONE DOING?? HOWS LITTLE HUNTER?? WELL GOT TO GO NOW

MISS ALL

BRENNAN

P.S. TRY SOME OF THOSE JOKES, YOU MAY GET A KICK OUT OF IT.

From: Evan
Sent: Wednesday, 25 July
To: 'Dale Brown'
Subject: SEC: UNCLASS - Navy Squids....

Dale,

Just catching up on reading your reader mail on the Megafortress website, and was surprised at number of people complaining about use of the word 'squid', etc.

Well, this 'squid' doesn't mind the term. I call the submariners 'pillowbiters', the surface Navy 'skimmers', fighter pilots 'knuckleheads', patrol pilots 'fish-heads', and get called a 'birdie' all the time. And each of those groups of people use similar terms when referring to other branches or ratings.

As you suggest, these people should chill out. Ask them if THEY have ever used a derogatory term for another Service member, police officer, etc. I'm sure that there are a few that haven't, but they'd be as rare as hen's teeth.

Cheers,

Evan
LEUT, RANR
ACRM2
ANZCE-WA


From: Ian Yunker
Sent: Friday, June 15, 2001 4:08 PM
To: readermail@megafortress.com
Subject: Greetings and question

Dear Mr.Brown,

I am an avid fan of your books and eagerly await being able to purchase your latest. Recently, I managed to acquire and read some of your earlier novels. I enjoyed them all profusely and would just like to say you are one of the best. However, I do have a bone to pick with you. My favorite novel is Fatal Terrain, but the portrayal of the U.S. Navy somewhat irked me. Don't get me wrong, I understand that a faithful crewdog like yourself has to go with the Air Force and its heavies, but why do you feel the need to portray the Navy so badly. I've noticed in some of your other books as well, Shadows of Steel for one. I'm sure there are Balboa's in the Navy, but I think you put them in a particularly poor light. I ask this because I will be attending Duke this fall on an NROTC scholarship. Do you really think the Air Force bombers can do most of a carriers job, or do you do that for the plot? Please don't view this as an attack, I love your stories and characters. I am just interested in hearing your thoughts on the Navy/Air Force relationship. Anyway, keep up the great writing over in Dreamland.

Sincerely,

Ian Yunker

Ian: Thanks very much for your e-mail!

Yes, I think manned bombers have just as much or even more capabilities as an aircraft carrier. With advances in the capabilities of standoff weapons, I think bombers will have even more of an advantage.

In my opinion, a carrier battle group takes too many resources just to do one thing--defend itself. Yes, a carrier battle group is a fearsome display of power. But most of the ships that surround a carrier are there not just for warfighting but to defend the carrier. Even most of the aircraft on board a carrier--all of the helicopters, all of the F-14s (except a few with air-to-ground capability or TARPS), all of the S-3s, and most of the F/A-18s are there to help defend the carrier. By contrast, bombers use mostly electronic self-defenses with a few expendables--99.9% of a bomber’s resources are there to put bombs on target. B-52s don’t even have machine guns on them anymore!

Most of the conflicts I portray are there just for plot; and I would certainly never get rid of aircraft carriers. But if I was an undersecretary of defense for acquisition or plans and I had to write a report to the SecDef about what the future of America’s military should look like, cost vs. capabilities, I’d push the stealth bombers married up with advanced “brilliant” standoff weapons, and reduce the number of carrier battle groups to pay for more bombers and cruise missiles.

Obviously, missions are different. Bombers don’t work well as a show of force or as a threat to the enemy. Some conflicts may not even happen because America parks a couple carriers off someone’s coast (like China’s intended invasion of Taiwan in 1996). Bombers can’t hold territory, help land Marines, rescue downed aircrew, evacuate personnel, pick up astronauts that splash down in the Pacific, or hold movie premieres of “Pearl Harbor.” But if you want something absolutely, positively destroyed overnight, send in a B-2 bomber.

Good luck at school and with your Navy career! Are you going to fly or command a ship?

GBA, Dale…

Here's one I made after receiving an e-mail with an attachment that was buried down through about 6 layers of forwards:

[IMAGE] You know when you double-click the attachment and there's a message inside from someone else, and you double-click that message and there's a message inside from someone else you probably don't know, and on and on and on?

And then you finally get to the last message and you double-click on it and your e-mail program warns you that "viruses can attach themselves to executables, macros, and Web pages?"

THIS IS HOW COMPUTER VIRUSES GET SPREAD!! Never pass along a message like this unless you know exactly who the message is from. Even if you think it's a valid warning, DON"T pass it along by forwarding a message from an unknown person!

If I get a message warning me not to open a file, I WILL NOT OPEN IT! I'll just throw it away. And if I have to dig down more than one level to read a message, I'll just throw it away.

So let's stop passing these multi-forwarded messages around, OK? Most virus warnings are hoaxes. You should all have anti-virus programs on your computers. If you don't, then my Christmas shopping is simplified!!

The same for the cutsie messages about how some sick kid started an e-mail chain letter that he wanted to go around the earth, or if you forwarded a message then JC Penney will donate a penny to a charity to every person who forwards the message. It's a hoax. Sometimes viruses get passed around that way too.

I had 2 computers infected with viruses early this year, and so I know how bad it is.


-----Original Message-----
From: Kit Hildreth [mailto:kithildreth@hotweb.com]
Sent: Friday, 21 July, 2000 11:53
To: readermail@megafortress.com
Subject: The new Cold War

Must say Dale, did enjoy and agree with your cogent analysis. I also liked the Buff mods as well, particularly the use of Bypass-Fan engines! One particular point with respect to nuclear/missile proliferation is that those nations are going to have to build R7 class vehicles in order to deliver a nuclear payload to the Pacific Seaboard, due to the loss of 1500+fps velocity launching against the Earth's Rotation. So frankly I see the threat as VERY easily detectable. Plus tracking ships equipped with interceptor missiles to strike during trans-atmospheric boost-phase should be able to deal with a "rogue" launch I would imagine. Even today, MAD can be invoked upon any nation in any case. By the way do you know what happened to the Soviet AMM umbrella around Moscow, built in the early seventies under SALT 1 which permitted each signatory to build a system around Washington DC and Moscow, but only carried out by the Soviets. I've drawn a complete blank.

-----Original Message-----
From: Dale Brown [mailto:readermail@megafortress.com]
Sent: Thursday, 03 August, 2000 11:16
To: Kit Hildreth (E-mail)
Subject:FW: The new Cold War

Thanks for your e-mail!

Anyone can pick apart any sort of anti-ballistic missile system. The basic fact remains: within 10 years, if the president gives the go-ahead, we can have a multi-layered system in place. It wouldn't be perfect, but it would be a whole lot better than what we have now, which is nothing. If the president defers a decision, that just gives other nations more time to develop a ballistic missile system to use against us.

The "rogue nations" argument is not directed at "rogue nations"--it's directed squarely against Russia and China. Any "rogue nation" knows it would be suicide to attack the United States with weapons of mass destruction. We are issuing a warning not to "rogue nations" but to the two former superpowers--don't try to build or export nuclear weapons or delivery technology, because if you do, we can deploy a system that will protect us and drive you into bankruptcy trying to keep up with us, like we did to the USSR. Of course, it would be diplomatic lunacy for a president to admit that he was considering an ABM system to counter threats from Russia and China. We're trying to cozy up to them.

There is not one effective ABM system. The truly effective system is a multi-layered system. Even that is not foolproof. But if we have the technology to help ensure at least a sizeable percentage of our government or people survive an attack, why not deploy it? It's a defensive system. It's the kind of thing peaceful nations build instead of nuclear weapons. Ship-based systems have advantages and disadvantages, just like airborne lasers or THAAD. We need all of them.

The Russians still have their ABM system around Moscow--in fact, last November, in response to Congress voting to encourage development of an ABM system, Russia tested its system for the first time since 1991. It's a forty year-old surface-to-air missile that uses a nuclear warhead to try to wipe out incoming warheads. It's effective to a certain extent--and as I said, it's better than what we have, which is zip (although a Patriot PAC-3 battery can be set up quickly to defend Washington, which would be many times more effective).

GBA, Dale...


-----Original Message-----
From: Jim [mailto:jim@earth.net]
Sent: Tuesday, 02 May, 2000 20:42
To: readermail@megafortress.com
Subject: Possible Agent?

Bear,

I have a potential agent I'd like your advice on. I queried a Literary Agency and got back a letter from an agent saying she would like to represent me. She included a contract I should fill out and send back if it meets my approval. The agency is listed in the Guide to Literary Agents 2000 and apparently has had some success in getting new authors published (if I can believe her letter). Her terms are as follows:

  • $75 retainer fee (one time)
  • Choice of plans:

  • $200 to submit to 10 publishers
  • $300 to submit to 20 publishers
  • $400 to submit to 30 publishers
  • *note: (Lists of publishing houses must be agreed upon by client)

    Client pays all postage costs

    Agency charges 10% royalty on domestic sales/15% on foreign sales

    Contract may be terminated any time the client desires, no refunds on fees already paid.

    Looking through the Guide to Literary Agents I see many agencies have these types of charges, but I'd like your input. She did not charge an initial reading fee.

    I got a letter back from another agent saying he wasn't interested. I got the letter from this agency the same day. I don't want to just jump at it if it's not the right thing to do. What do you think? I appreciate any advice you might have to offer.

    Jim

    Hi Jim!

    Understand I'm not familiar with this particular agency. She might be the real deal. BUT:

    I STRONGLY advise against using any agent that charges a fee to make submissions. This actually sounds like a scam to me.

    There is no financial incentive for the agent to do any work here--she's getting paid up front, so why does she care if the work sells or not? She won't make a pitch for your story, won't try to work with the editor to juice up the story, maybe won't even read it. Why does she need to?

    The "retainer fee" sounds like a come-on price. What exactly would she do for her fee? If all she does is mail out your manuscript to an editor, and say it takes her fifteen minutes, then she's earning $52/hour. She might be able to re-mail your manuscript out to all 30 publishers in one morning, which earns her $100/hour plus expenses.

    And then, if she is lucky enough to hook someone, she STILL gets her normal commission (any word about refunding the fees if she makes a sale? That would show a little good faith at least).

    I'd advise you to toss her name in the trash. There are plenty of agents out there who will read, evaluate, and represent your work for the normal commission structure--no sale, no pay. If you go through the whole list, then rewrite the query letter and send it out again, or maybe try another story idea and submit that one.

    Finding an agent is not easy--in fact, other than writing the manuscript, it's the hardest part of publishing. But you have an advantage in that you have a finished manuscript, which puts you far ahead of a lot of folks who want to be authors. A finished manuscript is an unpolished gemstone to agents. It has real value. Some agents will not see it, others will. You just have to keep putting it out there on the street until someone discovers it.

    Do you mind if I publish your letter and my reply on my Web site? I'll leave all names off.

    Dale...


    Younger Officers Quit Army At Fast Clip
    (Washington Post, April 17, 2000)

    Dissatisfied younger Army officers are leaving the service in droves, worrying senior officers and provoking intense internal debates about the problem. "The overriding theme is that there is no trust in the senior leadership," says a Pentagon official who has reviewed surveys of Army officers attending the service's mid-career Command and General Staff College. The alienation of younger officers has become so worrisome that the Army plans to announce today it is forming two blue-ribbon panels to study the situation.

    Well, here's what happens when the force has nothing to believe in and nothing to uphold--they vote with their feet. As it should be.

    We writers are doing what we need to be doing, what we have the qualifications to do: describe what the military of yesterday was like--the good, the bad, and the ugly--then describe where we see the deficiencies today, then describe what we think the future of the armed services should be.

    First: Call 'em like you see 'em. I get criticized all the time for calling Navy guys "squids," by not writing enough about joint operations, and for using too much profanity in my writing. These are the same folks who think we should allow non-high school graduates in the military, the same folks who think we should do everything possible--including not fulfilling the objective, IF a credible objective is indeed ever presented--to minimize losses, the same folks who think any woman should be allowed to serve in any specialty just because she is in uniform. THEY DON'T KNOW. It is our job to SHOW them.

    We all have a different perspective. It's important for all of us to present our own unique perspectives and not to blindly subscribe to any agenda.

    Second: Speak out when you see inaccuracies or deficiencies. I spoke out against the Kosovo campaign even though it is supposedly politically incorrect to criticize our leadership during an ongoing operation. I speak out when I hear media types in my area talk about how irresponsible and dangerous the Marines were for flying all those troops in a MV-22 at night using only NVGs. Don't let them get away with spreading bullshit. THEY DON'T KNOW.

    Third: when we've done all we can, when we've spoken out and harangued and lectured and bitched, we need to sit back, relax, pull out a smoke and a shot, and trust in the things we have built over the years. I'm not saying surrender; I'm not saying quit trying. I'm saying, Chill Out. Have Faith.

    We may not see very many heroes or leaders right now, but it doesn't mean they're not out there, keeping their mouths shut and their eyes and ears open like they're supposed to, wondering why things are the way they are and formulating better ideas. I see plenty of them out there right now. They might end up working for some Dot Com instead of being chief of staff, but maybe some old head will show him how he might be able to put his talents to good use in the service, and he or she will stay, and turn out to be the leader we've all been looking for.

    The Bozos might be the ones who make headlines, but there are plenty of good troops out there who don't care about grabbing headlines and only care about doing a good job for themselves, their family, their unit, and their country. We've got to have a little faith that someday they'll be allowed to rise to the top.

    Plenty of folks have predicted the end of the U.S.A. and the end of the U.S. military many, many times in my short and rapidly fading memory. But we're still here. Someone must be doing something right.

    GBA, Dale...


    Another correspondence is from a reader upset about my use of foul language in my books. The reader thought that one of the purposes of my books was to show how the U.S. military should be perceived in the eyes of the world: as moral, virtuous defenders of freedom:

    [IMAGE] Thanks for your e-mail.

    This is a very tricky topic, one I've dealt with for many years. Ordinarily, I would agree with you: using foul language is a sign of laziness and poor mental discipline. I don't listen to a number of popular stand-up comics because of bad language. Even some movies that I consider to be good movies (such as "Scarface") I think are spoiled because of the constant bad language. I have a 3 year-old son, and I'm very conscious about using bad language.

    However, as unfortunate as it is, obscenities are part of our society, culture, and language. It is especially a part of any branch of the combat arms. Most men and women under duress use expletives, mostly like verbal punctuation marks.

    I did notice on a recent research trip to Ellsworth AFB that fewer and fewer flyers use obscenities as part of normal conversation between peers, as was common 10-15 years ago. I take that into account in my writing.

    It is NOT my job to describe the Air Force or anything the way it SHOULD be--I describe it as I perceive it, based on my experiences, research, and imagination.

    It is NOT the U.S. military's responsibility to protect or police morality. War--killing, destruction, death, injury, occupation--is by definition immoral, so how can a soldier be a protector of moral values by training for, performing, and living a calculated, intentionally immoral professional life?

    I am even uncomfortable with the idea that our military exists to protect our freedom. That's a jingoistic concept used by propagandists and recruiters.

    The U.S. military is an extension of U.S. foreign policy and acts in the national interest when diplomacy fails. The military usually does its job best by TAKING AWAY someone's freedom, not protecting it. In fact, the military does not DEFEND anything except itself. The PEOPLE defend their own way of life by the power of law, the democratic process, and majority rule. The military responds to the will of the government (NOT the people) to implement foreign policy.

    I didn't mean to get on a soap box. I can tell you that I'm very conscious of using obscenities in my stories, but until I perceive that such language is no longer part of normal language, I'll continue to use it as I see fit.

    Happy Holidays! Dale...


    -----Original Message-----
    From: James A.
    Sent: Saturday, 01 April, 2000 13:58
    To: Readermail@Megafortress.com
    Subject: Character creation etc..

    Dear Mr. Brown,

    Tin Man was the first novel I have read in years, and it was as great as your others! As an Air Force air traffic controller working a second job, and trying to finish my college degree, free time is elusive, but I'm glad I found the time to read another one of your books(text books get old).

    I have decided to make an attempt at my own book, as I have a great story to tell. I am at the "infant" stage of the project and have a few questions I hope you could help me with.

  • Your create the best characters, is there a basic formula you use to create them?
  • In your books, it is almost like several stories that parallel each other and then mesh toward the end. In organizing this format, do you develop a basic timeline and then parallel the stories on it?
  • How do you ensure that you do not divulge classified information or projects. I seem to remember that Tom Clancy had the Air Force check it out first to make sure that he didn't, do you do anything like that?

    It's funny, because when I read a book(not authored by you, or an early Clancy novel), I am disappointed, and think I can write one better. So, having been inspired by you, I have decided to pursue a dream make it a reality.

    Thanks for your time and any help you may offer.

    Best Regards,

    Jamie A.

    Actually, I got into writing too partly because I thought I could do a better job than the guys I read. So you're on the right track!

    Unfortunately, I don't really have any pearls of wisdom for you. If you like to read, I think you have the makings of being a good writer.

    You develop characters because you need to build conflict. You need to have heroes, villains, lovers, mentors, etc.You use main characters that are part of the main plot, and minor characters that are part of the subplots. Any character that doesn't contribute to the conflicts in your story are unnecessary. I model some characters after folks I know, but I invent a lot of most character's personalities.

    Every story (plot) has subplots, or minor stories, what the movie folks call backstory. It's usually a story that explains a trait or motivation of a character. Hopefully, the subplots all come together sometime in the book so the reader understands why a character does what he does.

    My favorite lesson to explain this is the story about the knight out to slay the fire-breathing dragon, who is killing the people of a village. Everyone knows the basic story--good knight versus bad dragon. You can write this story, and it would be OK. You could write about the knight's journey, maybe throw in a damsel in distress, write a good battle scene.

    But what would be more interesting would be to add in the backstory. Why is the knight going on this quest? Maybe he's not really a knight but a poor kid with some stolen armor and a horse who is playing knight. Or maybe he was told a dragon killed his father, when it was really the evil knight, who is hoping the knight will be killed while on his quest so he can take over the kingdom. The story is more interesting now, isn't it?

    Go one step further. Put in some backstory about the dragon. Why is the dragon killing folks? Maybe the townspeople killed his mother and he's out for revenge. Maybe the dragon has been chained up all his life to act like an incinerator for the town, and he's tired of being chained up. So now maybe the dragon's not so bad now? Maybe it would be a tragedy if the knight kills him? Maybe the knight and the dragon team up to defeat the bad knight?

    This is how you build a story. The clever trick is to put in a twist at the end, sort of make the reader understand all the background, so the story ends with a bang. You can't confuse the reader, just use enough backstory so the reader understands what's going on.

    Good luck! Write anytime!

    GBA, Dale...


    Another reader with which I've been having a running e-mail correspondence battle had many comments on The Tin Man, mostly dealing with the technical inaccuracies but also disputing and questioning the whole reasoning behind drug control policy in the United States:

    My information on the procedures for making meth came from law enforcement sources. I do know many officers and firefighters hurt handling chemicals or stumbling across meth labs, but I freely admit I took plenty of poetic license in my book.

    But you missed the point. I try to be technically accurate, but I don't have any intention or any reason to be 100% accurate. IT'S FICTION! I need to be accurate only enough to get the reader involved in the story. Most readers don't have a Ph.D in chemistry and wouldn't know, or care, how inaccurate my facts are. I don't write books for the Ph.Ds of the world-I write them for guys like me. Actually, I write them FOR ME and hope that enough other readers like them so I can keep doing it.

    Most states nowadays don't incarcerate drug users-that's a myth too. States incarcerate burglars and robbers who steal money or property for drugs; they incarcerate drug dealers or makers; they incarcerate druggies who kill for drugs or turf; or they incarcerate individuals who are carrying a sizeable enough quantity of drugs so it appears they are dealing. Misdemeanor possession usually gets only a fine, if it's ever even prosecuted. Hell, you can get disability money for being a drug addict!

    What difference does it make if a cop is frustrated at the lack of effect the nation's drug laws have? The point is, IT'S THE LAW, and their job is to enforce the law. Cops get frustrated because of too much overtime, or not enough overtime, or sore feet, or too much desk duty, or bad coffee. They still do the job because it's their job and they swore to do it.

    Thanks to countries like Mexico, as long as screwed-up folks in the U.S. want drugs, they'll have them. Everyone from the police, the army, and the government down to the lowliest farmer will see to that. You will probably say that there is a supply because there's a demand, that the poor Mexicans make a better living supplying the drug trade than they would in legitimate business, or that a Mexican cop makes more from a single bribe by a smuggler than he will from a whole year of service in uniform. As long as that attitude exists, I guess we'll always have a drug war.

    I thank God there are people like my wife and her colleagues who were willing to put their lives on the line to try to keep drugs out of their community. You have the nerve to ask if she ever felt frustrated? You think that if she thought about it or just wised up she would finally conclude that it's not worth it and just give up, take off the badge, and let the pushers and junkies onto her streets and sell dope to her son and her neighbors' kids? That just tells me you simply don't have a clue.

    GBA, Dale...


    To: readermail@megafortress.com
    Subject: megafortress software

    Would you know where we could get the software for the megafortress game? We have been doing several searches on the internet, but with no luck... Any information would be appreciated. Thanks so much.

    Thanks for your e-mail!

    Unfortunately, I don't support the "Megafortress" computer game, which was based on my first novel "Flight of the Old Dog" and published several years ago by Three-Sixty Pacific. Several "Scenario Disks" were also published, which added dozens of different missions. It was arguably one of the most sophisticated and unique DOS PC games of its time. I'm very interested in making a Windows or Mac multimedia version of the game. If you're a software designer, drop me an e-mail and let's talk! If you bought a copy of "Megafortress" but lost the manual with the codes, sorry.

    But let's talk about a related topic: pirated software.

    There is a Web site where you can download a pirated version of "Megafortress." However, the game's authors built in a "demo mode" protection routine where you can fly it from Dreamland to Seattle, but you need the original manual to get the proper codes to continue to the combat portion of the mission. You can launch and fly all four crew stations, but when air traffic control asks you to "squawk" a certain code, and you enter an incorrect code, when you fly to Seattle and try to continue on the mission, you'll crash.

    As an author and copyright holder, where my livelihood and the lives of my family rely on royalty income, I resent anyone who pirates software. I especially resent those who pirate software and then have the balls to e-mail me and ask for the codes so they can continue playing their stolen game.

    True, it's been a few years since "Megafortress" was published, and you can't buy the software anymore, so you might think that downloading and playing a pirated copy of an out-of-production game is no big deal. Or you might be one of those who think that the producers, authors, and copyright holders already made a ton of money on the thing, so what's the harm in making one copy? Or you may resent paying hundreds of dollars for a "license agreement" which basically says you don't OWN the software you just bought, but you are buying the right to use it.

    The bottom line: pirating is stealing. You are taking away someone's possession--their copyright--by dishonest means. The only way this will really make sense is to own a copyright, sell rights to it in order to make a living, and then watch helplessly as your work is copied for profit. It's just wrong.

    I and many other writers rely on a concept called "fair use," where we can legally use copyrighted material as reference material, as educational material, or to make citations as part of an original work (as in my "Real World News Excerpts" section) as long as we don't distort the original work, we don't infringe on the owner's exclusive rights, and we give full credit to the owner. Using pirated software doesn't fall under "fair use" because it infringes on the copyright owner's basic right to distribute, reproduce, and sell the work.

    So if you downloaded the pirated version of "Megafortress," and you really like it and wish you had the proper IFF codes to continue the mission, DON'T write to me and ask for the codes. I won't give them to you. Instead, write to your favorite software publisher and ask them to make an updated version of "Megafortress" or a game/simulation based on my other works. If the software makers knew how many folks have asked me for help or for the codes to the game (well over 500 in the past few years), they'd be anxious to make all those gameplayers happy!

    GBA, Dale...


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    Another recent delivery:

    Getting these questions from my teen-age son, and his grandfather, (my dad) and wonder how to answer. How would you answer, based upon your research for "Tin Man?"

    What do you say to people that say,

    "we can win the drug war thru legalization."

    I actually do believe in some form of government-controlled production and sale of drugs, like a "State Store" for dope. But it wouldn't stop smugglers, black marketers, underage use, or addiction--in fact, if it was more widely available, I think we'd have more drug problems in our society, not less. The crime associated with drug use would not go down either--in fact, I think it would increase. So the need for drug laws, drug cops, lawyers, judges, and prisons would not decrease. We will always have addicts and other compulsive personality types (overeaters, sex addicts, control freaks, sadists, masochists, alcoholics, etc., etc.). Nothing you can do about it. Legislation will not stop it--it only drives it underground. State-controlled production and distribution (of alcohol and cigarettes as well as drugs) would give us a chance to learn more about the persons who are addicts and help them, if they wish to be helped. It would also provide another source of tax revenue.

    That,

    "we'll spend so much less without the army of drug cops, lawyers, etc..."

    Absolutely not true. It would be akin to alcohol and cigarettes--there will always be smugglers, black marketers, thieves, bootleggers, and just plain old folks manufacturing and selling the stuff, or preying on those who use it or are addicted to it. Along with laws to control distribution and production, we'd need more cops to enforce and patrol compliance.

    That,

    "the legislators must be on the drug lord's payroll allowing this to continue..."

    The price of substances like drugs, alcohol, and cigarettes will always be high, because legislators realize that substances that have a certain amount of physical or psychological dependence associated with them are good sources of tax revenue and prohibitive legislation. They can both create additional tax revenue by taxing "bad habits" or "destructive habits" AND look like crusading protectors of the people by passing prohibitive legislation, often at the same time. It's a scam, but we taxpayers go along with it.

    That,

    "a certain segment of the populous will always be addicted, look at alcohol..."

    Absolutely true. But if we simply legalized it, some punk or pervert could sell my son drugs and it would be legal. We are allowed to own guns as a right guaranteed in the Constitution, but it's still illegal for my son to buy one. That's as it should be. Anyone has a right in this country to his addictions and compulsions, but when their addictions start to affect mine or my family's way of life, either the government eliminates it, or I'll go somewhere where the government has addressed the problem, or I'll eliminate the problem myself.
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